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1. The premise appears to be a mix of William Gibson, Robert Heinlein, C. M. Kösemen and Harry Harrison. I am looking forward to your twist on these expectations.

2. In a near/far future, "OMG" or something entirely new "branding" filler expression would be more credible than "oh my God" unless Dr Linton was born in the 20th century, or you're creating a hidden/sly ref to the OMG particle, or you're actually planning to bring God into this novel in some unexpected way.

3. I like the brace dialogue markers. I have not seen them used before in lieu of double quotes.

4. The prologue does have a good hook, and I would def read more of your novel.

5. Good luck!

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